I liked how well you represented each prompt and how you used Rule Of Thirds for the happy prompt. I also liked the focus you had in each picture. One thing you could improve is the angle for the Square prompt, but other than that, your photos are really good.
Bullying is a big deal and is extremely common. 1 in every 4 U.S. students claim to have been bullied. There are many different types of bullying but they all have the same effect. Even something as small as laughing at someone or starting a rumor is pulled into that category. This mainly happens at school, especially throughout middle school. Schools are not handling this effectively because the numbers haven’t changed. I don’t think that anyone should have to go through weeks or even months of mental abuse. Schools really need to stop trying to get people to make the counselors office seem like somewhere that you need to go to if you're being bullied. Kids these days would rather be bullied than called a tattletale for telling on them. Instead, they should pay more attention to what goes on within their walls and realize whenever someone is being bullied. In 13 Reasons Why, Hannah was hurting and went to the counselor and explained that someone abused her and he told her tha
Russia Banned from Winter Olympics: 1. Who wrote the story? Sumin Kim 2. What is their story about? How Russia got banned from the Winter Olympics 3. What is their direct opinion about that? He thinks that they made the right decision to ban Russia because they let Russia get away with cheating for awhile. 4. Did they address what the other side might think about that topic? No 5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? No, they seemed confident. 6. Are there any quotes in the story? No 7. What point of view did they write in? First 1. Who wrote the story? Kiran Patel 2. What is their story about? Workplace sexual abuse 3. What is their direct opinion about that? No opinion 4. Did they address what the other side might think about that topic? No 5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? There was no opinion 6. Are there any quotes in the story? No 7. What point of view did they write in? Second 1. Who wrote the story? Jake Brien 2. What is the
I like the simplicity of your pictures and how well they follow the prompts!
ReplyDeleteI feel like you had a really good focus in all the pictures. I especially like how you used your hands for the "square" prompt.
ReplyDeleteI liked how well you represented each prompt and how you used Rule Of Thirds for the happy prompt. I also liked the focus you had in each picture. One thing you could improve is the angle for the Square prompt, but other than that, your photos are really good.
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